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Jessica de Koninck's avatar

With thanks from the the world's worst proofreader.

Jane Tainow Feder's avatar

The last few lines, Jessica, it’s how my mind has been going, overlapping, intruding thoughts, return to the previous. It’s good and sad to have company.

helena lipstadt's avatar

Thank you Jessica.

Your words put me in a contemplative state of mind, the overlapping petals of Pesach and daffodils

Joyce Lott's avatar

Thank you, Jessica. I always remember the loved ones who used to be around the table at the Seder, too. At 88, in a wheelchair, I feel grateful to be there.

Zigi Lowenberg's avatar

wonderful poem

Zigi Lowenberg's avatar

Also thanks Jessica for sharing/teaching all the packed in goodies in your poetry month missive.

Simone Wallace's avatar

Counting. An exquisite poet. Beautifully structured. And the sentiment. So moving.

Danny Bobrow's avatar

Great but please spell wormser